This was a great idea, but poorly executed. I was trying to squeeze a lot into a four-panel strip which doesn’t have much realestate to begin with, so it looks too busy. Plus it was hard to align and size everything correctly so the characters are out of proportion to one another. (eg, Notice how tiny the Yorp is now. Argh!)

*sigh* Ah well. Such is life. Hopefully you can at least get a general idea of what’s going on.

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