That description of Keen’s parents is way longer than it needs to be, but for some reason I just felt like being obnoxiously wordy for this one. And speaking of too much type, now that I’m looking at it, the lettering is really small on this one. I’ll have to work on a zoom-in feature, because you know that’s way easier than actually editing the copy down. 😛 In the mean time, you can right click and open the image in a new tab or just download it, I guess.
(EDIT: I increased the width of the site overall — which it’s long overdue for anyway — so that should help.)
But yeah, just about hit the two-week mark with this update. I’m not saying that’ll be the norm, but like I always tell my wife: Keep your expectations low enough and you’ll always be pleasantly surprised.
I didn’t think this was too wordy at all! A good amount of exposition, I’d say. I like that.
Ha, I’ve even learned a few words from this series. “Acquiescent,” hmm….